Ярослав Хорьков

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Последняя работа с попыткой повторить рекламные баннеры. Работа полностью самостоятельная. Жду хороших советов в будущем

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Leogia

20.09.2022

Тень фотоаппарата на первой картинке выглядит искусственно и небрежно. Посмотри на ютубе ролики как они тень объектам рисуют. В целом версия с Никоном мне нравится больше чем с Лейкой

АПД. У тебя на фотике уже есть свет\тень, поэтому если ты тень рисуешь в другую сторону, подсознательно человек это видит и его это нервирует

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Ярослав Хорьков

27.09.2022 Автор

Спасибо

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Gastins

20.09.2022

Напрягают белые полосы по бокам. Если отдавать такой макет на печать, то они будут забирать на себя лишнее внимание.

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Ярослав Хорьков

27.09.2022 Автор

Белые полосы присутствуют на оригинале, а не на моей работе

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Gastins

28.09.2022

Да, криво прочитал пост

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