Творчество

22 мар 2021 22.03.2021

К сожалению шакальное качество, но пишите так же свои стихи про хейтеров ;)

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Артем Мертвоплясов

22.03.2021

уже есть идеальные стихи на эту тему)) (Подпись видоса не к посту)Про универсальный комментарий.

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FunkThatSheet

22.03.2021

Бессмертная классика

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Лис Снежный

22.03.2021

Хейт на хейтеров это тоже хейт, автор хейтер

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Аккаунт удален

22.03.2021

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Аккаунт

22.03.2021

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zabóta

22.03.2021

Ща бы думать что у меня хейтеры есть, м-да.

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Аккаунт

22.03.2021

А у меня есть(((

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zabóta

22.03.2021

А стихи?

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Аккаунт

22.03.2021

Только грозные кореянки с оружием.

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Юра Губкин

23.03.2021

Форма чуть-чуть похрамывает (в частности рифма), но в целом задумка хорошая. Постарайся в будущем не рифмовать слова "полюби" и "любить", да и в целом, тут почти к каждой рифме можно придраться. Все равно, это уже неплохо, удачи в твоих начинаниях

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