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Творчество

26 сен 2021 26.09.2021

Стих на ночь, гусята🌙

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Линия к линии чертится подлинно.

Я не накручена, только потрачена.

Линию подлинней. Вяжется ломаной.

Я не взволнованней, чем одурачена.

Стержень фиалковый. Ровные ссадины.

Рваные шрамы - и, нёбо запалено.

Я не линейная, я не украдена.

Просто лиловое небо завалено.

Горизонтальное. Вялое. Прошлое.

Я не поранена, вроде, не брошена.

Только беззубое солнце проросшее

Линию к линии чертит усопшее.

Линию к линии чертит тебя волна.

Я не хорошая. Ведь до сих пор твоя.

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Marcus Valerius Martialis

26.09.2021

Могу я попросить разбор произведения? Никак не могу понять: что за линии, почему потрачена, что такое фиалковый стержень, почему солнце беззубое etc

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Lesya Bird

26.09.2021 Автор

Доброе утро. Воспользуйтесь своими ощущениями. Этого хватит) может просто вам не понравился и не зашёл

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S-punk

26.09.2021

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